After getting constructive feedback on my magazine front cover I changed some of my sell lines that I had chosen. I swapped ‘fashion is the armour t survive everyday life’ with the sell line ‘winter trends’ as I feel that the quote wont appeal to my target audience as much and the winter trends sell line represents more what the genre of the magazine is.
This was my first article and design for one of my double page spreads. I felt that this layout and design was boring and did not appeal to my audience as much as it could have. the layout also did notlook like a typical fashion double page spread.After doing research and looking at other magazines on what the typical fashion magazine look was, i altered my article to be layed out in columns rather than paragraphs, have a title on either page and only images that fill the A4 page on one of the sides of the double page spread. My second double page spread here was very messy and did not identify with the typical magazine look. Some of my feedback points were to enlarge my images as they were too small and also to make the title larger so it stands out to my audience more.I then had the typical fashion magazine look by enlarging the images I had, adding a bold title for my article and lastly instead of using paragraph for my layout i used columns
Ellie bartlett 